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(y/n)s POV

About a week passed as I settled into my new home, the self-titled "Creepypasta Mansion." It really was huge, and I wondered how noone had ever noticed it when walking through the woods. I didn't see the Slenderman, but I figured it - he - was patrolling the woods around the house as Tim, and his companion, Hoody, sometimes did.

I met most of the houses occupants, including Slendermans brother, Splendorman, and the "doctor" of the house, Eyeless Jack. They were all pretty creepy, but were nice enough once you got to know them.

The most intriguing of the mansions occupants had to be BEN. He was dressed in elven gear, a bit like Link from Majoras Mask, only he was paler and his eyes were nothing but black gaping holes with tiny red pupils. He seemed to be wary of both me and Tim for some reason.

One day, he said:
"They'll be looking for you, you know."
I stared at him, confused and a little weirded out. Suddenly, he disappeared, seeemingly into the TV he had been playing videogames on. It flickered briefly before turning onto the local news channel.
How is he doing that? I thought,We can't get cable out here in the woods....

The anchorwoman shuffled her papers nervously and turned to face the camera.
"Searches for local girl, (first name) (last name) , are moving into their seventh day...." she began in a squeaky voice.
"The examination of the woods near her house has turned up traces of blood, but police are yet to confirm whether or not it is hers..." she chirped on, like my life was nothing, just news to be read out.

Letters flashed on the screen, urging anyone who might know of my whereabouts to come forward. Shots of my parents, eyes swollen, asking for me to please come back , we miss you so much, please, come back.

Oh, God...

I felt sick, like in my dream, so dizzy and tired , trying to comprehend what I had done.

Come on, (y/n) ,  you know this! You came here because- I came here because....because Tim loves me. That was how he saved me.Right?

Just then, Tim came in, dragging his left leg behind him.
"Holy crap!" I shouted, suddenly coming to my senses.
Tracing from his left ankle to just under his knee were fresh burns and lacerations.

Eyeless Jack quickly came running down the stairs with a bulging first aid kit. He got Tim to lye down on the couch, the same couch Tim had laid me on a week ago, and opened up the kit.

"(y/n)," said Eyeless Jack, "Could you help me with this please?"
I agreed and helped Tim roll up whar was left of his lower pant leg up over his knee.He winced. I could see hime supress screams of pain as Jack gently daubed antiseptic on the fleshy pink of the wounds. I helped to hold Tim down while Jack applied antiseptic and dressed the wound.

"Tim....what happened?"
"We-we were patrolling the woods and there were- there were policemen- Slenedrman was- he was hungry- he got angry be cause they spotted us-he attacked and- hit me- accidentally...."
"Oh, God...Tim.."

I came here because Tim loves me. That was how he saved me, right?
But maybe...Maybe I'm..I'm starting to love him too..


And again, I buried my face in his chest, feeling his warmth, and sobbed pathetically into his accepting embrace.
CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!

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(So so so sorry! Too scared and its night! Not risking it ;^; )
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Pandorasbox3 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
Mom, Dad, take a chill pill. I left a note.

Parents: No you didn't.

0.o Well........... I meant to.Wolf Eheh 
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DJDiamond Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More, PLZ?
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student Artist
I'm totally turning red oh please don't add any sex please! It's so weird......
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homersquish Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Student Artist
Oh god, I literally couldn't, I can't write....that sort of thing, it's just too embarrassing! I'm just really not good at it!
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student Artist
THANK YOU!!! you are a life saver I would faint if you did
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
erm meh gerd
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Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
MAWR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
NUUUUUUUUU
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Sandstorm15629 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
MOOOOOORE!!!!!!!*hugs masky*I MUST READ MORE!!!!
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
More soon I promise~
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Sandstorm15629 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Please soon....
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homersquish Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student Artist
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Moonlightring Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
If you make more, will you please tell me when the next chapter is up? C:
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
Yes ok , I can tell you~ More soon I promise~
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sameramery Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
OMG make more plzzzzzz!
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
Yes ok ^^ soon
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MissCreepypastaNeko Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Student General Artist
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SilverStarSparks Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More please!
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homersquish Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student Artist
fav.me/d81110g ^^ Part 8
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
Yes ok ^^ soon
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Yay!
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JynxxTheKiller Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cliffhangers are the work of barrels.. TELL ME YOUNG ONE; AUT THOU BARRELITH? (idefk)
but moar pls.
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the barrel's in slendy's basement!!!!!!!!! THE BARREL'S!!! PEWD'S THE BARREL'S!!!! STPHONO!!! HELP!!

Pewd's: THE FU*KING BARREL'S DIEEE!

Stephno: YOU FU*KING BARREL'S!!!


slendy, masky, hoodie, jeff and ben: O.o "what"?
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
OMG XD
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
grim: BARREL'S!!!

pewd's* *stabing the barrel's*

stephano: *killing them*
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Artist
^ ^
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ yes we WON
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NUUUU!! Timmy..... *sits in my private sad corner*
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isumi828 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Artist
FUCKING CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!! THEIR JUST AS BAD AS BARRELS!
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amber213slade Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I hate both of those too f*ck you barrels
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isumi828 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Artist
Yeah you know what's up *brofist*
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*brofist every were* BARREL"S!!!! DIEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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isumi828 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Artist
Kill all them barrels
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
BARREL'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHH!!! don't say the name!!!
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isumi828 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Artist
Q^Q but you said it...
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*LE GASP* I DID!!! NO!!! I WON'T SAY IT!! YOU WON'T TO!

Pewd's: don't worry! we all say it some time's! right stphono?


stphono: Yes pewd's.


pEWD'S: see? nP!
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isumi828 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Artist
Wooo!
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homersquish Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Artist
!!!!!!!!!!!!

[+5 points]
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More plz :(
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Moar please +w+
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Are you going to finish?
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homersquish Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
Yes, I will, I've just been very busy lately, more will come soon hopefully.. ^ ^
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9509649 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student General Artist
oh yay XD masky is my favorite 
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homersquish Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student Artist
Here's the next part fav.me/d81110g ^^
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divoha4-1 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Little tim a fall guess whos out for blood now? ^.^
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Red1hood Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Timmy Tim Tim you poor proxie
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heyimkait Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Tim tim, things are looking grim grim. Luckily for you you ive got a solution!
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